Reviews for For Mom

wish i could write something like that.

but here:

A big tree that shelter love?

A burning candle that burn for others?

Or an angel that light up life?

i think there are a few grammatical errors. shelter should be shelters, and burnburns, lightlights.

there is a chinese saying that mothers are like candles, they give you light as they burn themselves away...
LoonyLuna chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
All I can say is wow! Great imagery...very meotional..nealy made me cry. Well done :D
FaithMemory chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
aww this is so sweet. Your mom will be happy when she reads this. :) the emotion is very obvious here and I like the simplicity of this piece. :)
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
D I love the way you walked yourself through the poem, from being unable to write it to completing a great poem at the end