Reviews for The Apple Trees
howdylv08 chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Aww this was cute! When it switched from the past to the present was a little confusing. Maybe put a line of dashes across the page... Otherwise, I really liked it. I could imagine the orchard and everything. Then it turned dreary and I could see the whole demeanor of the place turn dark and gray instead of sunny, golden and yellow.

Great job again!

Sophie :3