|Reviews for Innocence and Petulance|
| Guest chapter 23 . 4/21
Good gracious! What a story! What an amazing story!
| bubublacz chapter 23 . 1/21
| The Golden Orchid chapter 23 . 11/11/2016
Holy mother of God. This is probably one of the best supernatural romances I've ever read. I just couldn't take my eyes off of the screen for the past few hours. That plot line was impeccable. And Maggie was so perfectly flawed that I could relate to almost every emotion she felt. Your writing is magic. I am still feeling the after effects of reading your story. So damn perfect. Thank you for posting this.
| emilyconnell7 chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
I am ages late, I know but i was wondering... Will you ever do a sequel? This story is amazing and I would love to see how Finn and Maggie get on. I seriously must know more.
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 23 . 10/3/2015
Wonderful story! I really enjoyed reading this!
| orangefeelsxoxo chapter 12 . 7/6/2015
Hey I'm reading on chapter 12! First chapter where sylas appeared and he's already my favorite character! Lol
| Esther K. Binny chapter 20 . 11/25/2014
HI, you probably don't read reviews on this story anymore! I'm like, five years too late for the hype but I'm hyping so mad right now!
I wanted to say that I just really loved the progression this story made in the last few chapters. I LOVE Maggie's little change and I love her and Sylas's little thing right here! They seem really fun and adventurous. I'm not saying drugs are good, y'know, it's obviously down to the person who consumes the product and the person who deals it if anything goes wrong, but yeah, you portrayed them having fun and I like that. You portrayed the character's being informational about it - like Sylas's little info about E and stuff and how he was all like, "this isn't just a little bit of weed," ah I just loved it. It was REAL.
And I love reality involved with fantasies like these - it's the cherry on the cake. Brings us back to how life goes on - right? I get that anyway.
But yeah, anyway, I just saw your little note at the end here and, I got all annoyed for you - here in my "too-late-for-the-hype" hype, and well, some people just don't know "life" at the end of the day. And this is life! You've managed to capture life within a character which is obviously great! Love it all, missing Finn's absence but absence makes the heart grow fonder :)
all in all, I'm on chapter 19 and I'm loving it. I really like Maggie, you've developed her well as a character - even Sylas. And Finn and Blair - all of them great. :) I'm intrigued to see the end.
I'll continue reading now.
| thegirlinthelibrary chapter 7 . 10/30/2014
Hey! Just started to read this today. And I love it. Simply love it. There has been plot development all this time and I have to say that the writing is beautiful. The way you write is just breath taking and i really like the Finn character. I want to know more about him. I didn't really see any grammatical mistakes and I loved the prologue and even the first few chapters drew me in. I could not get enough and it piqued my curiosity. Overall, so far you have created a powerful, carefully plotted story that i love to read. :)
| QueenPersephone chapter 23 . 2/27/2014
Great story I liked the ending. I don't suppose that there will be a sequel? Maybe a hormonally crazy Pregnant Maggie by chance?
| R. Ficst chapter 23 . 2/26/2014
You clearly put a lot of work into this story. Thank you for sharing with us. I enjoyed the read. I would love to read more of their life after this, how they navigate the politics and challenges of his world together.
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/27/2014
The drug use was almost too much for me to handle but the last two chapters were so beautiful and honest. I very much enjoyed your story thank you for sharing it with us.
| Becsdj chapter 23 . 1/9/2014
I really enjoyed this story. Thanks.
| Dark aisling chapter 20 . 11/20/2013
I dont care what anyway says. This story is flippin brilliant! I can't stop reading
| goolsbygirl chapter 23 . 7/29/2013
This is, potentially, the most wonderful thing I've ever read. I hope beyond words that a publisher finds this and you get a book deal and live happily ever after. Truly wonderful and well written. Lovely character development. This could spawn a million dollar franchise. I earnestly suggest a manuscript and attempting to get published. You're impeccable! Xoxo
| Eli chapter 23 . 7/11/2013
I absolutely adore your story. The intermingling of darkness and sweetness keeps me interested. I enjoyed the rated M scenes, and you balanced them nicely with real world insight. I would love to read more! A long epilogue, or even a couple more chapters about their lives and potential marriage would be greatly appreciated. Please keep it up!