Dude, she is sick. In a way, she kinda just assaulted him. Brutally. It must hurt a lot. (

Update soon!

love.

Wow. Sorry, but that was creepy. Unless it was supposed to be creepy, then great job. So... Not that much to say. Only that I feel so sorry for Sarah. She thought she was going to get out, and she wanted out so bad that she was willing to do THAT. And then she's completely mistaken and ends up seducing him. That is possibly the most dramatic idea I have ever heard. Keep going, because I have a feeling this is only the beginning of a very twisted relationship.

WTF!

UGH! I hate cliffhangers!

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The sexual tension is really good. Some people try to make tension between their characters and totally mess up

OH MY GOSH IT'S STARTING! I'm liking the chapter, no matter what you said otherwise. It's hinting even more at Garrett's past until I think I'm going to go nuts. I suppose you'll just have to review. *Sigh* And don't worry. I'm not putting any pressure on it. I just enjoy reading this.

wow so when i started reading this story i was like this is probably not going to be good, but i decided to read it and see. well like i said wow this has been really good so far. so please continue.

Another update? Cool.

I liked this chapter, it's good to see Sarah still fighting to escape.

It seems like Sarah's attracted to Garret or is it Stockholm syndrome?

I'm interested to find out how you plan on covering two years - it's something I've been wondering about since reading the first chapter. How are they meant to evade the police for two years when they've already had so many close encounters.

I eagerly anticipate the next chapter.

Leila

He can't because he fell in love with her right? Right? Am I right? I'm right! Gosh, I LOVE this story!

Great chapter. I really look forward to seeing what happens next.

Just spotted a mistake "I kiss that I didn’t consent to," should be "A kiss..."

I did like this chapter, I can see their relationship changing, but again a part of me was surprised by the speed of it all. I didn't expect Sarah to respond to a kiss this soon.

I liked that we got some background on Garrett; it was pretty obvious that something happened to him to make him how he is, although it doesn't condone his actions.

I'm surprised that Garrett opened up to Sarah about his past, especially so soon.

DEFFINATELY LIKE GARRETT. :D

Aw they kissed!

Cant wait for the next chapter!

Awesome chapter! That was really intense, what with him softening up, talking about his life, her starting to stop loathing him and develop a bit of a crush. And that kiss was well set up. You know, you really are managing to develop their relationship without going too fast, and that's a rare thing. Keep up the good updating.

This is a really interesting and well-written story. Keep it up :)

Oh my God, the prologue alone was SO powerful. You really have an amazing talent for portraying emotions.