| Reviews for Stockholm |
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   apollyon rises chapter 1 . 5/25/2009 i love love love this story. can't wait for the next update! |
| A Freak Like Me chapter 4 . 5/25/2009 You've got me hooked...update soon! |
| Emma Ablaze chapter 4 . 5/25/2009 Great chapter! Establishing some good points. You're doing a good job making the emotions realistic. I commend you on her still being afraid, but talking together and laughing together. Update please. |
| We Used To Wait chapter 3 . 5/24/2009 The police's actions make me smile. They seem kind of loopy, you know? Like it doesn't seem like they know what they're doing by they actually do. And it's just cute when they feel like they "failed at their job." It made me smile. :) Update soon. Love. |
| class.act chapter 1 . 5/23/2009 This is a really brilliant first chapter. I don't know how I'm restraining myself from going on to the next, but I just had to tell you how good I found this. The plot is amazing; though I have read something like it on fp, it's probably going to go in a different direction, going forward some years maybe? And I really want to know Garret's reasons for staying quiet. Is it because he feels that he doesn't deserve her love? That she deserves more? But then again if they were together for (almost) two years, shouldn't he be over this by now? Also, I was wondering, and I don't know this, as I'm not American either, but won't the Court give him the right to see his child? You write so well. And I love the correct grammar. |
| Binenthorne chapter 3 . 5/23/2009 Jeeze, abduction must be a b*tch...Post soon ) |
| Emma Ablaze chapter 3 . 5/23/2009 Wow. I am seriously impressed. You manage to update not only extremely fast, but with long, well-written chapters. And this chapter was especially satisfying. It's amazing how you manage to mix humor in with all the drama. Keep up the good writing. |
| Binenthorne chapter 2 . 5/22/2009 Okay, good start, post soon... ) |
| thebestday chapter 2 . 5/22/2009 Man, I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! UPDATE! |
| We Used To Wait chapter 2 . 5/21/2009 First chapter was seriously sad. It reminded me of Naughts and Crosses. Not that you've probably read it. |
| Hemii25 chapter 2 . 5/21/2009 This kind reminds me of a lifetime movie i saw recently. "Taken in broad daylight" Ever seen it? It's pretty good. Update soon. |
| Hemii25 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009 Aw! Great first chapter. |
| Emma Ablaze chapter 2 . 5/21/2009 Okay, intense. Wicked intense. And wow did you update fast! That was seriously impressive. Just one thing that's so insignificant that it only matters if you get really OCD. You mentioned that you weren't from the US, which brings me to the conclusion that you use Celsius, therefore "in the high teens" would be warm. In Fahrenheit, that is a freezing winter day. You said this was set in the US, so to add some authenticity, you could change it to Fahrenheit degrees. Or, you could call me crazy and ignore that. Either way works |
| Emma Ablaze chapter 1 . 5/20/2009 Oh my gosh YES! Thank you. This really grabs the attention and is remarkably touching. I just love this kind of star-crossed lover story. Keep going please. |
| MellyMeliza chapter 1 . 5/20/2009 Wow, Super interesting story idea! Cant wait for the rest. One quick question though: How old are they? |