Reviews for Stockholm
A Darker Heaven and Hell chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Are we going to see what happened when she got kidnapped? And yes he should be sentenced to jail probably for life, but people should know that she really does love him.
Guest chapter 32 . 7/19/2013
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Mariam chapter 32 . 7/19/2013
Thank you for the update! I have been waiting for this update for what seems like forever lol. It will be interesting to see what will happen once they are in Amarillo- will they meet with Tom? I cant wait for the next chapter.
MellyMeliza chapter 32 . 7/16/2013
Yay! You updated :D it's crazy to be how long I've been following this story haha. I love it! It's really good. Is this gonna be how Sarah gets pregnant? Ahhh. I'm scared for them just walking about. Anyway. Good luck with your writing :) keep up the good work!
Ascendead Master chapter 32 . 7/15/2013
Oh my god! I was so happy when I saw this update! Thank you so much for taking time out to continue this amazing story!

They didn't use a condom when they had sex, but I'm guessing they'll worry about it later if they haven't yet figured it out. Also Garrett sure has a mouth when he's angry.. He threatened Sarah twice, although she did return it the second time.

But anyways, awesome chapter! I look forward for the next one! :)
K.R. Schneider chapter 31 . 1/10/2013
I started this story yesterday and finished the entire thing as of last night! I know you haven't been around in a while and haven't updated for a good chunk of time, but I just wanted you to know how amazing this story is! I just could not put my laptop away. From the very first chapter I was completely and totally hooked! Your characters are so likeable and I while, I was sure I would end up liking Garrett I had no idea that I was going to be able to love him like I do! And believe me, I do! haha. I just wanted to let you know that people are still reading and still enjoying your work! And that it's fabulous! If you ever get around to finishing I will be a very happy camper! :)
Lindy chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Update Soon, the story was going so well. Does Garrett ever get out of prison?
pinksocksrule chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
This was one of my favourites on here, amazingly written and had me on an emotional roller-coaster, it's s shame you never managed to finish it but it leaves a little mystery. A great story, thanks so much.
Nat chapter 31 . 10/28/2012
I'm not even sure if I'm coherent enough to express just how amazing this story is. In the past 5 hours that I sped through all 30 chapters, I have cried, and laughed, and squealed, and gasped in horror, and cried again (almost bordering on gross sobbing, might I add), and cheered, and cried AGAIN but with joy.

Needless to say, I was emotionally exhausted by the end and it was absolutely worth it. The one thing that hooked me right from the start is how unashamed you were in showing the readers just how unquestionably deep and beautiful Garrett and Sarah's love is, despite everything in reality tearing them apart. Even the first chapter itself made me cry, and I was like, well damn, looks like I'm parking my ass here 'coz this gon' be good. Like I said, it was WORTH IT.

As for the writer's block, don't feel pressured by it. RL can be such a massive cockblocker, so take all the time you need to sort things out. To be honest I am incredibly satisfied that Chapter 30 ended on such a positive, hopeful and surprisingly kick-ass note. I was practically screaming at my laptop at what selfish and unforgiving assholes Sarah's parents are and how they kept bossing/clucking Sarah around as if she were still five (as you can see I was very much emotionally invested at this point), so when Sarah finally found out the truth and confronted her parents - and also finally growing a backbone and hightailing the fuck outta there - I was literally cheering for her! Also not forgetting that Garrett finally pulled his head out of the gutter and accepted Sarah and their continuing undying love, you could say I was very, very, very ecstatic and overjoyed that I literally started crying.

What I'm trying to say is that, however incomplete this story is, for me, if you don't ever update past Chapter 30, it serves as a perfect open ending that gives the reader a positive, hopeful outlook to Sarah and Garrett's future, and in some ways, there is closure.

But of course, you'll be leaving A LOT of unanswered questions, such as how Tom (senior) died, what will happen in Armadillo, and also what happened in the events leading up to Garrett's arrest. And, like any other romance stories, Sarah and Garrett deserves their happily ever after, eh? It seems inevitable that Garrett will still be in prison for an obnoxiously long time, but even if it's 20 years, I still want to know that he will be reunited with Sarah and their son, and that they never gave up on each other even after all the years, y'know?

Ugh and look, I've practically written an essay here. I'm so sorry! I almost feel like it's obligatory to insert, 'I JUST HAVE A LOT OF FEELINGS OKAY?!' but really though, what you have here is an amazing piece of work and I want you to know that it's one of the very few FP stories I have bookmarked and stored under 'All-time Favourites'. I may or may not register for an account just to keep this on Story Alert, but no matter what, whether in months or a year, I will still check back for updates.

Last but not least, thank you so much for showing us just how pure and beautiful love can be.
Guest chapter 31 . 10/24/2012
please finish it :)
mia aurora chapter 31 . 10/24/2012
please continue it will mean so much to me :)
musingSanity chapter 32 . 10/24/2012
I got really excited there when I got an email in my inbox and I thought :O she has uploaded a chapterrr...but then I realised it was just an author's note :( Oh well I'll just wait patiently for you...hope to see the next chapter soon :D
Shadowsgirl9 chapter 31 . 8/30/2012
really liked this:)
Guest chapter 31 . 8/7/2012
This story is amazing. It was one of the rare stories I actually cried during and I know that you probably won't ever finish it so I'm just not going to pretend like that was the end of the story. You know, like the the ones where they leave you to come up w/ your own ending? Yeah, I hate those but that is what I'mgoing to do. I loved it! :D It was way better than Twilight and Gosh, I can't believe I cried. I got really emotionally involved with the characters. 3 You are great writer and I hope you continue to write in the future. It would be such a waste of talent if you stopped writing. Anyways, 5/5 starts :) ***** 3 And btw, you are pretty. I love your hair! (if that picture is you...which I'm assuming it is)
Guest chapter 31 . 7/31/2012
Thank you so much for actually updating this. I literally found this story yesterday and read the whole thing in one sitting because I loved it so much.

I don't care WHEN you update but I care THAT you update. As long as this gets done it's perfect! :)
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