Reviews for Tears You Apart
Lissa Ringrose chapter 2 . 1/30/2010
Wow just wow... publish it now, this screams "MAKE ME A BOOK, please."
Theresa98 chapter 50 . 1/18/2010
Wow! This was such a great story! I enjoyed it so much that some nights I could hardly stop reading to go to bed. I'm sad to see that it's over, though at least it had a good ending. It was such a cute idea to make Aubri Hadrian's Second. Anyway, loved your story and I can't wait to read more of your stories!
Sakiru Yume chapter 50 . 1/18/2010
I liked the chapter, but the end was really anticlimactic. I wanted to see more Hadrian. I did like the quote by Emperor Hadrian. But it was not really an ending, at least to me. It just kind of...happened, and they you said it was done.
ThePureAndSimpleTruth chapter 50 . 1/17/2010
*sigh* So great. I'm quite depressed to not have any more Hadrian/Aubri action. But, it was great. I love how you ended it with Kael, semi-reflecting on Aubri and Hadrian. Anyway...I hope to read more great things from you!
Dagonmaster chapter 50 . 1/17/2010
First off, I wish to sincerely apologize for not reviewing sooner. I've been swafthed with a load of work since last year and overall I haven't had time to continue reading.

With that said, I got caught up and read all of your posted chapters. But alas, enough of my rambling, for I shall go onto the review.

The ending for this tale was absolutely spectacular in my opinion. It was definitely bitter sweet, for both Aubri and Kael were now a part of the supernatural world and, wouldn't be able to see as much of each other.

I liked how both Aubri and Kael still have sibling love for one another, despite their respectively allegiances. Also, in a general sense I liked how tied things together and concluded everything respectivfully.

What I found practically hilarious however, was when Aubri met up with Becca, and how she asked her if they could continue their original plan be with each other.

In my opinion, it served her right to be rejected, for she was the one who'd originally abandoned Aubri and thus, she doesn't deserve living with her.

Also, Aubri's a vampire and thus, their relationship wasn't going to work in the first place.

In terms of the entire story, you did relatively well in keeping the plot engaging and consistence. Also, you're characters were spot on and thus, were an overall joy to read.

In the end, this story was great to read and thus, I can't wait to read the next installment that is presented.

P.S: I also maybe inclined to purchase your book in order to see how the story started.
Angel-Leigh Jones chapter 50 . 1/17/2010

wow - that ended really well - sad actually. Thanks for posting this great great story. :) Looking forward to anything new you may post one day soon perhaps? :)

Sakiru Yume chapter 49 . 1/14/2010
I liked the chapter, as always. I liked the one before this one, too, but I didn't get to review on it. Sorry 'bout that. Anyway, the only thing is that it was really obvious who was being picked as his second.
SapphireEyedStranger chapter 48 . 1/14/2010
Okay. Right. Since it ate the review I wrote for the chapter after this one... I shall have to rewrite it in a review of this chapter instead. But it probably won't have as much gusto as the last one. FictionPress has irritated me.

I feels all loved now. You are awesome too. And I also send big love to the you.

You don't have to fear, the ending is working really well - I love that you have Melchior skulking around ominously. I am sensing bad things from him in the future. :P

I'm loving the little germanic pet name. :) 'Little Soul', am I right? It works well, I think it adds an extra little bit to Hadrian... it made me melt some. :P

I can't wait for Blood's Faith :P Well, I can... but you get what I mean. It's going to be awesome. I think, to pass the time while you're taking time out to write I shall be re-reading your stories so far. 'Cause I can. :)
SapphireEyedStranger chapter 49 . 1/14/2010
Angel-Leigh Jones chapter 49 . 1/13/2010

wow it's coming to an end - which is sad but all good in one. Thanks for the mention at the end. I know i haven't reviewed as often as i should've but that didn't mean i didn't love the story.

Your mom sounds like a gem - and Emma too.

I still want to buy a copy of submerge but it's impossible with our budget we are just making ends meet and there is no spare. We were nearly at the point where we were close to canceling internet all together because we just didn't have money. Luckily we found the cash and we still have it - for how long I'm not sure.

Can't wait for the last chapter and the preview. Thanks for posting this.

Angel-Leigh Jones chapter 48 . 1/10/2010

another great chapter. i really liked this one. Aubri waking up and pouncing was really cool. And her not recognising Hadrain but knowing he was safe was great too.

I am guessing a roman emperor maybe? I'm not going to say which one other than it starts with A ... just because i used google which i guess is cheating but i was curious.

Sakiru Yume chapter 47 . 1/8/2010
Yay Hadrian! Did you know that there was a Roman emperor who was named Hadrian. I learned that yesterday in History class.
TooLazyTooLogin chapter 47 . 1/8/2010
I love love love this story, your doing a really good job on it!
Angel-Leigh Jones chapter 47 . 1/8/2010

another great chapter. I loved how Angela was surprised at how Hadrian turned Aubi - a nice touch. The writing was great - very clear and detailed. I felt like i was really there. Poor Aubri i wonder what will happen when she wakes. I am a little sad that this one is coming to an end.

aflores90 chapter 46 . 1/7/2010
Hey! Nice chapter. I think it was just the right amount of sappiness. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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