|Reviews for Redo|
| Who Is This Girl Anyway chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
You manage to get quite a lot into a little here, which is pretty good. You also experiment a bit more with vocabulary, which is nice to see. I think a little more imagery would be nice, but then again the minimalism in here is quite a good thing, especially if you're like me and just want something to skim through on the afternoon.
| Amaury chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
I really like this. :]
It's simple, but really holds an empathetic meaning for me.
"I look for a new flower."
I like that line the best.
Even though it's sad, at the same time, a small ounce of hope is left.
Maybe the next flower will be a he loves me.