Reviews for Redo
Who Is This Girl Anyway chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
You manage to get quite a lot into a little here, which is pretty good. You also experiment a bit more with vocabulary, which is nice to see. I think a little more imagery would be nice, but then again the minimalism in here is quite a good thing, especially if you're like me and just want something to skim through on the afternoon.
Amaury chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
I really like this. :]

It's simple, but really holds an empathetic meaning for me.

"I look for a new flower."

I like that line the best.

Even though it's sad, at the same time, a small ounce of hope is left.

Maybe the next flower will be a he loves me.