Reviews for Missionaries
Crimson Dizzy chapter 7 . 9/15/2009
I love the ending. A happy doodie "I-love-you-Eric-I-love-you-too-Joseph-let's-get-married" so wouldn't have fit the tone. I felt a wee bit sad that Joseph wouldn't be seeing Brian again, but I suppose it made sense. I liked that it wasn't a completly sad ending either, it was mixed. I feel happy after reading it now, anyway.

I have nothing constructive to say. Sorry. Fantastic story, as was the last version, can't wait to see more from you!
Sanguineus chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Thank you so much for pointing out the MxM in the made me very happy! Jonathan and David are so cute -devilish smile-

I love the story btw.
Drizzle chapter 7 . 9/12/2009
I call for a second part! but in all honesty, I love the ending to this one. The "next semester" thing is such a cute twist
Drizzle chapter 5 . 9/12/2009
I think the reaction's believable enough, especially since you paced everything out really well. I'm loving this story!
crack the sky chapter 7 . 9/6/2009
i liked this, a lot.
Poptart Guava King chapter 7 . 8/11/2009
hm well i guess the ending was fine. i don't feel that feeling of annoyance and sadness that i would normally get with a yea its great!
kepteinen chapter 7 . 8/10/2009
-That's- the end? What the flying fuck? Dude.

It did work, I guess.. but I still want more. :
kazoua chapter 7 . 8/9/2009
You know what? That was really, really unexpected. Until I read 'end' I was mentally going through the various plot lines the story will take. I kept thinking about Brian and how, maybe, the guy's going to blow his head up with denial. Then I thought about Eric and how he sucks as a 'boyfriend' but is somehow an okay guy and that New York will probably change him for the better. Then I thought about Joseph and horrible condition his mind is in and how, maybe, he'll start to improve.

Then you had to end it. Ah. It was wonderful while it lasted, though! Yep. I really liked it. I personally think you should extend the story, make it one of those insane 50 zillion chapters type of sagas that bring him through his entire life. But, meh... it'll probably sicken you.
kepteinen chapter 6 . 8/6/2009
Still no mansex. Oh well. I can wait.

This story is amazing, by the way.
Poptart Guava King chapter 6 . 8/5/2009
Wow. I've yet to read any slash fic much like this one. :D
kazoua chapter 6 . 8/1/2009
Eh. Twisted logic.
Second to the Left chapter 6 . 8/1/2009
I... am not sure how I want this story to end.
AnnaG.Luv chapter 6 . 8/1/2009
Of these boys have issues. But they're issues I enjoy reading about.
Second to the Left chapter 5 . 7/24/2009
I thought it was good

Brian seems confused and highly unpredictable,

so yeah

I thought the attack seemed plausible.

Nice chapter, by the by.

Updates, puhlease. (:
AnnaG.Luv chapter 5 . 7/24/2009
I think with Brian punching Joseph in the first chapter at least shows that he is somewhat violent and far from docile.
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