I wish that Elezay and Rai make up . Other than that great story

This was so beautiful! I love Rainier and Kailas so much. I love Daymon and Belle and I just absolutely love love love Jazel. She wasn't around as long as everyone else but she left a lasting impression.

It's perfect I love it

Omg! I can't believe it

This story is definitely one of the best here on Fiction Press. I could read this over and over again. If you haven't already, get this story published. I would love a physical copy of it :)

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Simple and intresting

OMFG I KNEW IT AND I HATE THEM AND OMG WHAT IS WRONG WITH THEM WHY WOULD THEY DO THAT TO HER?

Lol, betcha Kailas won't take it super well.

Wonderful story!

I love this story! Your writing is so good, and the characters are so interesting!

I bet Rainer's dad essentially married her off to that creep...

Except yes way in hell, Rai, yes way in hell!

Loving this, thanks for writing!

Great story. Just wooooooooooooooow .
Really creative plus super fab.
Do you know in India Kai-lash is the name of sacred mountains where one of Indian god is believed to be live .
great work.
All the best n write more stories.

I love this story, but Layton's giving me the creeps and he's not even real. That's how good this story is; it makes you feel what the characters are feeling. - Shelley

This chapter is great. But it brings up a couple of questions I'm curious about. First, why does she feel like she does towards her father and secondly, she stills does not know what the guy that is staring at her is. I hope I find out soon. - Shelley

Hi, This is a great beginning and has captured my attention. Looking forward to your next chapter. - Shelley

I love this story sooo much. I can't hate Rainier(damn I almost wrote Vinaya as her name, still stuck with His Captive xD) because she's a teenager, thus prone to stupidity :D
Sequel? You really know how to lighten someone's mood. Yeeeeyy!