Reviews for Burning Brightly
slcjnk2008 chapter 6 . 3/11
I love this story, but Layton's giving me the creeps and he's not even real. That's how good this story is; it makes you feel what the characters are feeling. - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 2 . 3/11
This chapter is great. But it brings up a couple of questions I'm curious about. First, why does she feel like she does towards her father and secondly, she stills does not know what the guy that is staring at her is. I hope I find out soon. - Shelley
slcjnk2008 chapter 1 . 3/11
Hi, This is a great beginning and has captured my attention. Looking forward to your next chapter. - Shelley
somersaultkick chapter 31 . 11/1/2015
I love this story sooo much. I can't hate Rainier(damn I almost wrote Vinaya as her name, still stuck with His Captive xD) because she's a teenager, thus prone to stupidity :D
Sequel? You really know how to lighten someone's mood. Yeeeeyy!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/26/2015
Blackswan
rashmikango27 chapter 31 . 9/3/2015
Amazing writing and a great plot ,this story was amazing. I couldn't stop reading it! Great job:)
lirrie chapter 16 . 8/9/2015
├łeeeeeee that was so cute
MilkyWaySora chapter 16 . 8/3/2015
Yay! A date! So happy Kailas came to terms on how he felt, faster than I thought. Good chapter :)
MilkyWaySora chapter 15 . 8/3/2015
Yes, I knew he had feelings for her. Why else would he keep going back to her. Poor Kailas is so confused! But a confused Kailas makes for a sad and heartbroken Rai. Hopefully he can figure it out soon. Thank you for the super awesome chapter! Loved it! :D
MilkyWaySora chapter 14 . 8/3/2015
Nice! I love kissing scenes! I think Kailas will start to develop feelings for her soon, I hope. Awesome chapter! Thank you :3
MilkyWaySora chapter 13 . 7/31/2015
Oo! I know who it is! Another awesome chapter, thank you!
MilkyWaySora chapter 12 . 7/31/2015
Haha! So funny! And the rumors X) This chapter is full of win!
MilkyWaySora chapter 11 . 7/31/2015
Wow, that was awesome! I was really looking forward to seeing Rai's powers. The there was the wings, that probably would have looked so cool if it were real! I really enjoyed this chapter! Thank you! :D
MilkyWaySora chapter 10 . 7/31/2015
Yay! She can use her fire! I once had a dream I could control electricity an shoot powerful tendrils of lightning out of my hands. That was so awesome! Very good chapter, again! :D
MilkyWaySora chapter 9 . 7/31/2015
I want to fly! *flap flap flap* I would also not like to be the girl with the milkshake lol X) Super awesome chapter! Love it!
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