|Reviews for Like Air|
| Jodiexxx chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
I somehow felt sad for Rei. No idea why, just kind of did. Yay. Another nice story(:
| Ichiro chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Here's your review. :D
I already pointed out the "let's"/"lets" problem(?) through YM, so that's outta the way.
Generally speaking, I like the flow of the story. The way you wrote the main's feelings, albeit obsessive?, was just cute and fluffy (well, in my opinion anyway XD /shot).
Maybe you've improved, or if you think you didn't, I'd still say you write cute BL. XD
(Why do I get the feeling that I sound somewhat...old? x_x)
| Dun dun DUN chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
It sounded pensive and reflective, and what I wrote was just a reiteration of itself.
The somber mood is infectious, which makes the ending very, very, sweet.
...shall I press the "applause" button?
| Bela chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
I really like the flow of the story. It's really light (read a serious sci-fi novel for heavy). I don't think it's obssesed and I kind of like how Rei overthinks everything. The ending is really sweet. I worship Q.
| MR chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Oi~ What happened to the Fairly GodKid? :))
Anyway~ WAH. It's so cute I like it. :3 HAHA. Train of thought. La lang.
I didn't notice any typos... or I just read too fast but I don't care. :)) It's the plot that's important.
Reindorse air BUT WE ALL NEED AIR. We need reindorse? XDD Lol. Random thought.
I like it. I should add it to my favorites, cept I don't have an FP account. So I'll bookmark it instead. :))
Keep it up~!
MR Mister. haha. lolz
| Lillers chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
I agree with what Sirius said XD It was really good for characterization. Although he does sound a bit obsessed here. :P
Your writing improved :3 Save for the typos but I could let that pass since you posted this at 3 am. Good job :3
| Mr Sirius chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
...AW. That was cute :))
When I told you Reindors was like Spalding you really didn't hold back, did you? Though he seems more contemplative than Dad anyway *sideways glance* This is excellent for Rei(n)'s character development. Very good, very good indeed. We are very amused. Though (i don't know whether it was just situational but) coupled with the first story, I'd say Rei is a little obsessed.. Either that or it's just me.
By the way, with regards to your writing, I'd say you've really improved. Seriously. Think of it as, you've gained a level. Kudos.