| Reviews for The Butterfly And The Floating Sun |
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   ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 7/15/2011 The repetition worked quite well in this piece :) I enjoyed reading it. |
| Counting Petals chapter 1 . 6/15/2009 I love the imagery here. The ocean image was my favorite, and I think the italicized words were used to great effect to enforce that picture. Beautiful poem! -Steph |
| fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 6/7/2009 A lovely imagery - very vivid and imaginable ) I wasn't sure whether the shape of the poem was deliberate but it certainly is pretty! Again I wasn't sure if this was deliberate: "The beautiful innocent butterfly fly’s" - seems it should be "butterfly flIES". Anyway, great poem! ~fleur |
| Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 5/30/2009 I liked the imagry, and the way you incorporated water, like ocean, floating, waves, etc, into the rest of the poem about a butterfly and the sun...Very creative! Loved the poem! |
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 5/27/2009 loved the poem! felt it's pretty romantic (don't laugh), and i get the feeling it's somewhat a tragedy(my opinion).. :P KEEP IT UP! |
| Screamo Scream chapter 1 . 5/24/2009 wow thats awesome love it P |