| Reviews for The Deal |
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   rated-XXX-35 chapter 16 . 6/12/2012 OMG! :D That was such a cute and amazing story! LOL you should make another one. I enjoy these stories :) You are a great writer |
| 3DarkGoddess3 chapter 16 . 12/23/2009 I really liked this story it was a good follow up to the bet. I kinda wished it was longer because they were great characters. |
| rubberduckysabc chapter 16 . 8/5/2009 :) |
| animegirl214 chapter 16 . 6/8/2009 aw. that was cute. :] and we never saw "Mary" again. XD it was a bit fast.. the ending i mean. but ehh. watever. it was still really really rilly GREAT! :D |
| xoxo1 chapter 16 . 5/31/2009 aww, that was only 16 chapters, but it was great! she sorta reminded me of danielle, how she kept going between thomas and del. but yeahh, loved the story. x |
| kuririncute222 chapter 16 . 5/27/2009 lol it was a fast story but i loved it! Glad that Danielle got married to Trist soo cute! |
| ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 16 . 5/27/2009 it's pretty cool...i like it...but hey, don't mind me telling this but i really think u ended The Bet in a HORRIBLE way {sorry abt it, but it's true}...almost everyone expected and wanted Dani to end with Ash...how could you just like, you know, discard him like that.?...n that plan thingy was pretty unusual,but it was humorous...but i dunno i still feel Dani should end up with Ash...i got so attached to her that even though i'm reading The deal from Candy's pov, i want to know more abt Dani...and m more interested inher life...of course Candy's life pretty much rocks too... i hope you dont mind me ranting about the ending of The Bet... good luck with The Deal... |
| JZK chapter 16 . 5/27/2009 this was funny how much does candy sleep? it was really sweet too I loved it |
| XxXMiDnIgHt chapter 16 . 5/27/2009 That was adorable. i loved it and well done. you have like minor typing errors...but minor as in really minor XD i'm adding this to my favourites btw you're a talented writer |
| XxXMiDnIgHt chapter 10 . 5/27/2009 aw! 'are you jealous?' i loved the ending to this chapter XD going on to read the rest |
| ShineLikeAStar chapter 7 . 5/26/2009 I love it! |
| JZK chapter 6 . 5/26/2009 I like Thomas better than Del even though he is a pig Thomas was really sweet towards the end I cant wait for more |
| XxXMiDnIgHt chapter 5 . 5/25/2009 I love it! haha go Candy! XD |
| JZK chapter 4 . 5/25/2009 I love how shes not telling tyler what really happened and leaving thomas in a tight spot |
| JZK chapter 5 . 5/25/2009 this chapter was funny why does dannielle hate candy? |