Reviews for give you daisies
multiples of six chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Hmm.. interesting. I like the tone this has; the atmosphere is.. grimy? I'm not sure if that's the word I'm looking for. But I feel like it could definitely benefit from some editing, tightening, maybe a bit more background information i.e. on the significance of the daisies. I think it has potential, though.