Reviews for River of Blood
jAsMiNeLoVeStWiLiGhT chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
that. is. good. i like...imagined it. -shudder-
The Chaos Sorcerer chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Wow, i love this one. A lot of feeling and power in those words. And nicely constructed...i could almost see it.
fallenflame13 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Dark, but I really liked this. I found it interesting how you refered to death as home. Good work.
Isca chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Wow. This poem flows really well-it's smooth, yet chilling. The tone of the line, "She smiles," is particularly amazing-suggesting that the pain and approach of death brings joy to the speaker; she finds peace and a release. It's rather sad, though, that the world became so cruel and painful that there was no joy left to comfort the speaker.
WinMyHeart5444 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Wow, this was so good. It was graphic, but not in a bad way, because I didn't finish the poem feeling bad for the girl. I felt happy that she was where she wanted to be.

My favorite part: "A pool of cerise liquid: Growing deeper by the minute" It was so vivid. Hehe. Keep it up! :)