Reviews for The Night of No End
Through.The.Flame chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Another great price of writing from you! Man, this one was very well written, too! I loved the theme of the masks, and the ending was really good ( in a kind of morbid way, lol)! I only have 1 question, did the 2 pol who fled end up dying, too? Loved it anyway!
PushingDaisys chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Awesome. Simply beautiful. You ent out the message flawlessly
Kate Marshall chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
I think the idea of this is tremendously clever. :D I love the fact you're telling a story (very well) throughout the poem. This was very entertaining to read.

I really hope you put this into single-spaced stanzas. It would be so much better that way. This is too long to leave a block stanza and single-spaced stanzas would make the poem read smoother. (Hold shift while pressing enter or backspace to single-space up or down.)

Wonderful poem!

-Peach/Kate, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Really interesting piece, I loved the fantastical elements of it. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.