Reviews for Lacertus
ADSpencer chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
I really liked the images in this because they were vivid and realistic. I wrote a poem once about a snake eating a pig at the zoo and had a lot of fun with it myself.

The only thing I saw that could have been improved upon would have been the ellipses at the end of every line. They proved a bit distracting, even though I understood their purpose in the poem.

Nice job,

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