|Reviews for Fire in the Desert|
| The Great Lord Pyro chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
Not exactly much going on here eh? Well as always Im anxious to read anything ya got for me.
| Blazing Chaos chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Heh, this seems like an interesting idea to have some bonus side-stories for your main one. )
Is the line "Hearing the light crunch of a boot on grains of sand, Amal tensed" meant to be longer? It seems a bit like when I have lines where I start writing a sentence and get distracted and then don't notice it's unfinished.
All this does is fuel the mysteries in my mind about your work, even more so than already, which means it's definitely succeeded in its task. As for the suggestion that these two are a couple of important characters, well, that just makes me even more curious.
Keep on writing!