|Reviews for The Agents of Alcarion: Academy|
| gigglebug chapter 16 . 1/30/2010
YAY! cute fluffiness! :3
d'aww, that made me really happy inside. I tear up when people show a lot of love for each other, and I'm over here bawling :3
| gigglebug chapter 15 . 1/30/2010
well, I suppose we won't be making that mistake again.
well, the family who cries together laughs together eventually.
| gigglebug chapter 14 . 1/30/2010
oh bother D:
that's pretty much all I've got to say.
| gigglebug chapter 13 . 1/30/2010
Maybe, darling Zack, if you weren't such a jerk you wouldn't be having this problem!
and the reason he didn't get the mission was because it won't work when they're not working together! it's against the code! :O
(or something like that.)
also: Chicago! but: toxic spill D:
yep, I'm not stopping until I get a massive headache or until I finish what's here. XD
| gigglebug chapter 12 . 1/30/2010
I just realized you used your name as names for the random teachers XD
the tress are funny, I like them! XD
I want Ita to gain some confidence and smarts, naow! DX
one typo, though. [[Zack tapped his had knowingly]] head or hand? or neither?
| gigglebug chapter 11 . 1/30/2010
I'm not gonna lie, that E-Com thing is really cool and I want one :P
I really like how you're pacing things, m'dear. lots of action, slow chapters, and then lots of action again. I applaud that since I can't do it very well, if at all XD
| gigglebug chapter 10 . 1/30/2010
I lied. I couldn't stop DX bwah, I love it!
Pfft, hotshot Zack. Pfft, I say.
Lira's companion died, methinks? :(
hehe, wrist computer is a bracelet. hooray! and happy sisters, hooray!
staying away from them for very long is not going to be good D:
| gigglebug chapter 9 . 1/30/2010
okay, last one for the night and then I'm stopping before my brain explodes with happiness XD
all this "feeling language" stuff makes me happeh! :3 I'm super excited to see how this plays out *-*
hey wait, does this mean that Ita's going back to Earth now? And it's only been 2 HOURS? It felt like it would've been longer than that ;_;
oh heck, what do I know XD
onward! ... tomorrow! *brick'd*
| gigglebug chapter 8 . 1/30/2010
Zack is her partner from Earth! the summary told me so XD
what about Mom? that'll be ugly later, I'm sure :O
| gigglebug chapter 7 . 1/30/2010
Star Terk much? :D
also, the black monster thingies make me think of Heartless from Kingdom Hearts *brick'd*
I'm sorry these aren't as much reviews as they are trains of thought, but you're welcome to delete them if you desire XD
| gigglebug chapter 6 . 1/30/2010
towards the end, I got a little confused with all the she's and knowing who's speaking, but I might have very well skipped over something. *brick'd*
Ita seems a lot like Luke Skywalker in the sense that she's got potential and all that. XD
| gigglebug chapter 5 . 1/30/2010
Okay... maybe this chapter will be my freebie review :D
(doesn't mean I'll stop reading, though :P )
I really liked the descriptions you used in all the chapters up to this point. Everything is really clear and it paints a beautiful picture (or ugly, depending on what it is) in my brain. Lovely :D
You mentioned once or twice that they're in 8th grade, but I keep thinking they're in high school ;_; maybe that's a me thing, but they act too mature to be 13? I don't make sense to myself sometimes, I hope I made sense in that part to you.
I really do not like Ita's cynicism though. at all. stop getting yourself down, crazy chica! it's heartbreaking. :(
oh yeah, I like that you use simple Spanish in it too :D is she Spanish, then? or is it just assumed that people in Jersey would know Spanish?
lovely, lovely! 27 more chapters to go (for me)! :D
| gigglebug chapter 4 . 1/30/2010
yeaah, action :D here we go, time for teh real plot!
oh hai, nevermind me. hehe... ;
| gigglebug chapter 3 . 1/30/2010
I KNEW IT! JEN'S A BAD GUY!
I knew something like this was going to happen. and yet I'm pulled in! D:
jerk! jerk! Chris fail.
meanwhile, DON'T GET EATEN! D:
...I hope you're liking my commentary and reactions to your chapters XD
freebie review, coming up soon (I hope?).
| gigglebug chapter 2 . 1/30/2010
this whole thing with Chris better not be some cliche :O
oops! still not the freebie yet. hold up, I'm caught up in this thing!
*adds to alerts*