Reviews for A Golden Flake |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Me likey the Deathly Embrace, |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhmahgod This story was wonderful :D completely awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story was really awesome i loved reading it. i hope you write a sequel D |
![]() ![]() ![]() aha, i love it! i'm sad it's over, but the ending was great! |
![]() ![]() I think you should do Deathly Embrace. i like the stories where its like the girl runs into someone like the devil or, like your story, Death himself. have you read "The Story You Shouldn't Know" by bingo yet? i think you should, because these two stories are probably my favorite, yours and hers. keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alejandro died? anyways that was a good ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great... Death. That really cheared me up. Sorry but my Uncle just died hours ago and my other Uncle is barely alive. He's critically ill and we fear this may push him over the edge. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i cant believe u ended it lyk dat. gosh. hahahah its okay. :/ (so im kinda lying there but yeahh) btw cant wait 4 new stories. ahahahah xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was AMAZING. I sat here just reading. Geez. And (read your profile) for 14 you are very talented. I'll have to check out some more of your work. The characters were great. Especially Xavier- ha, I liked his personality. It's really over? x: Gah. I'm glad I found this when I did. Excellent job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cant wait for the next chapter! you got me completly hooked. Hurry up writing the next chapter please(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really good chapter. You are a very good writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best Story ever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! i'd really like to read A Deathly Embrace, it seems really cool (: so yah. (: xoxo Emsy |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! they kissed, finally! that totally topped this day as the best ever!(: as for your question...i really don't know. they all sound pretty good...i guess i'd have to say either a deathly embrace, or the seven deadly games of marsine. |
![]() ![]() no i didn't want her with Xavier ohh well |