| Reviews for A Golden Flake |
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   disappearing in the shadow chapter 15 . 7/24/2009 The Seven Deadly Games of Marsine :D hehehehe |
| AlijaS117 chapter 15 . 7/23/2009 awesome! update soon! |
| TERMINATED chapter 15 . 7/23/2009 YAY! HAPPY DANCE HAPPY DANCE HAPPY DANCE! |
| truebleu chapter 15 . 7/23/2009 I was very satisfied with this chapter! I especially like what tally and xavier have come out into! im also looking forward to your new story! i liked the preview a lot! ur faithful fan, truebleu p.s. will jace play a bigger part in this story? |
| Elise Cromwell chapter 14 . 7/23/2009 we! xavier's soo sexy! i really liked this chapter! she totally burned jace! |
| emmasofie chapter 14 . 7/23/2009 cool chap! im pretty exited xavier has an older brother, it'll def make things more interesting :P plz update soon xoxo Emsy |
| truebleu chapter 14 . 7/22/2009 OH! i love the whole tally/xavier thing i also like jace being in the story i have a feeling he is gonna make things a lot more interesting is nixon gonna have a minor part from now on? i rlly want to read the next chapter post asap ur faithful fan, truebleu |
| TERMINATED chapter 14 . 7/22/2009 Ok well I guess I forgive you SLIGHTLY. But I want.. No.. NEED more x |
| AlijaS117 chapter 13 . 7/22/2009 your new story sounds awesome! I'm really excited let me know when you upload it! :D |
| TERMINATED chapter 13 . 7/22/2009 Coulda been better. I wanted him to hug her when she needed it and maybe kiss her but it'll do... |
| emmasofie chapter 13 . 7/22/2009 (: i liked this chapter even though not much happened... i think you should post this story, it sounds cool, and exiting (: please update as soon as you can! xoxo Emsy |
| Elise Cromwell chapter 12 . 7/17/2009 aw, xavier's cute(: but anyways, i agree with what you said about this chapter in the author's note. it was kind of shabbily written. maybe if you just added better vocab and went through and straightened things out it would help. i love the way it's coming along, though!(: |
| emmasofie chapter 12 . 7/15/2009 ooh (: i really like this story! :P i wanna read the next chappie (: btw, your action scene wasnt bad at all, i wouldnt have been able to write one, for sure :P please update soon! xoxo Emsy |
| TERMINATED chapter 12 . 7/15/2009 OMG I LOVED IT YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON So I'm really sorry I ain't been updating music and madness but thanks to this story I know what to do! Kinda. Loves ya |
| 0-ancient-greece-rocks-0 chapter 12 . 7/15/2009 wowzers. some of the chap was a little shaky but other than that it was terrific (as always) oh and if youre gonna do a mermaid one LMAO you should totally go with a little mermaid spy twist. ursulas the leader of the 'gang' and ariel is her top assasin or something and ursula sends ariel to find eric and kill him and along the way she falls in love with him. really and complete sucky summary but at least i have a bit of imagination. crazy imagination but imagination all the same. haha. wow thats kinda sad that i can crack myself up. i must really be lame. this message was brought to you by the sometimes random genius of... ~ancientgreecerocks~ |