bloody hell - that dean is mental - a whip, seriously? did he bang his head really hard or something.

Xavier was so sweet! this chapter just made me love him even more. and atleast Nixon wasnt being a complete twat this time

This is a great story and keep up the fantastically fantastic work. Can't wait to c wat u come up with next!

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That was awesome a lot of action!

omg some action! gives a kind of adrelanin rush when you feel like the xavier on a rescure mission - lol - but wow I cant wait for more. I didnt expect the story to head in this direction at all

If you loved me I wouldnt have to wait...

I have an obsession with spy stories so when you upload the story let me know!

I really like where this story is going.

I also admire all your work.

I particularly like this story bcoz i can find tally's stubbornness in me.

i cant wait to see how the story is gonna turn out.

Your faithful fan,

truebleu

I LIKE SMILEY BOB!

You forgot to mention me sayin it was smiley boob :(

So just to let you kno why im about to end "Growing up fast" my best mate is dead, my girl just miscarried so my baby is dead and now my girl is in hospital on an IV, unconcious having tests run because they have no clue wtf is wrong with her atm. And it doesn't look like she'll pull through.

So I'm sorry if you don't want the story to end but I'm afraid I don't have much choice. Sorry.

a.

That is so messed up. First Xavier telling her that he no longer wants to be fiend, and now she walks in on Vic. I personally think Xavier did not send the note, maybe it was Sarah.

About the pics I sent you... Just write and then add the rest

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I dont think Xavier gave that note - maybe it was someone else since he was acting like he had no clue what telly was talking bout when she said Him and wouldnt talk to him in general. and if he did give that letter - then he is a idiotic twat.

wow I was expecting tension between Xavier and Vic, Amelia and Ben are adorable

Xavier rocks! He was so sweet again in thsi chapter. he could so fit tallys discription of a fierce cuddly wolf

In your summary, you mean "adieu", not "ado". "Adieu" is pronounced roughly along the lines of "ad-yuh" and means goodbye, "ado" (as in Much Ado About Nothing) is something completely different.

OMG...I just have to say that I LOVE this story, and have become obsessed with it.

I love how you write!

This is the type of story that you can publish! Its really good!

Now that I've let u know that...

Yes Xavier rocks! lol I think he is really funny, absolutely hilarious! And Vic...he seems really sweet. And I have this feeling that Vic and Xavier are going to be VERY close to Tally..hmm? lol

I can't wait for the next chapter!

*sits and waits patiently while smiling riduculously* lol

:D

1, I loved it. 2, I hate you... Vic AND Xavier holding her hands.. Well thanks for making it harder for me to decide who she should be with! 3, GO YOU FOR UPDATING! 4, Did you know your ":]3" looks like a face with boobs...