Reviews for A Golden Flake
Mrs.Cupcake chapter 8 . 6/24/2009
Hi! Love how the story is going. She finally gave up the whole "I'm not gonna be your friend" thing. I love Xavier, he is such a cool character.

I have a question, does Vcic like Tally?

Anyway... I was visiting your profile and saw the picture of Xavier. To tell you the truth I pictured him younger looking , the guy in the pic does not look like a guy in high school. Well I found this two guys that I could maybe picture like him. Please dont be mad at me, if you think otherwise I would totally accept it, why wouldnt I, you wrote the story.

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Love the story! please update soon.
JZK chapter 7 . 6/23/2009
loved xavier in this chapter!

I found Tallys ending comment funny
AlijaS117 chapter 6 . 6/21/2009
awesome chapter!
XxCaptainKoalaxX chapter 6 . 6/21/2009
Nice Chapter...Hope U can update soon!...BTW. HAPPY BIRTHDAYY!P
in-white-houses chapter 7 . 6/14/2009
o i hope you feel better soon

but im one for breaking of boundaries so im gonna say xavier most definitly
Badger In Disguise chapter 7 . 6/13/2009
Xavier! All the way. i hope you feel better...good luck.
TERMINATED chapter 7 . 6/13/2009
I'm not sure...Don't make me decide...I think probably Vic...But part of me keeps getting pulled to Xavier!
hostilitywolf chapter 7 . 6/12/2009
Snow man for sure! I love him to death! lol. hurry and write more soon.
AlijaS117 chapter 7 . 6/12/2009
snowman all the way!
Badger In Disguise chapter 6 . 6/11/2009
You watch True Blood? I read one of the books and was scarred for life-even further(Band Camp-good times).

I would hate to be a mother and find ou that my son wasn't a virgin(and unmarried-if he was married, it would be perfectly fine with me). I imagine she would be pretty angry, I would. Good job on this chapter.
JZK chapter 6 . 6/10/2009
I like the fact that Karen and tally got along and bonded because usually in stories the rich mothers are usually always snobs who stick their nose up at everyone in stories

I also love the scene where karen freaks out with xavier not being a virgin - so funny - I cant believe she actually called sarah a whore to her face
TERMINATED chapter 6 . 6/10/2009
Love it! I would have shouted when I saw that it was updated but I've lost my voice. I would of danced but I can't stand up. Not without my crutches. Popped a bone out my foot... Fun.

And don't worry you aint the only one who doesn't know when or where the next update is coming from. I have my story to continue since no one wants me to end it, new stories to start, a dog to walk once I can walk, boxing to start once I can walk, counselling appointments, doctors appointments and alot of other things to do... Fuck I'm going to be busy lol x
Concerned Citizen chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
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Elise Cromwell chapter 5 . 6/8/2009
hey, this is realy god! i realy like it!

keep up the good work!
JZK chapter 5 . 6/7/2009
I did not expect Nixon and Isa to be back - what twats

I cant decide if I want her to end up with Vic or Xavier - their both great choices to get the story twisting with Nixon coming back in

this is gonna be very intersting - I cant wait for more
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