| Reviews for A Golden Flake |
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   AlijaS117 chapter 5 . 6/6/2009 I think it's the perfect pace and great chapter! Update soon! |
| TERMINATED chapter 5 . 6/6/2009 It's AWESOME CAN'T WAIT FOR AN UPDATE Although I'm torn. I can't decide whether I want her and Xavier together or her and Vic...Dammitfuck! (My bf's fave word :L) |
| Perfectly Mythical chapter 5 . 6/6/2009 LOVE YOUR STORYI think it's cool. Well, admiration is all i can give D Luv Kay |
| Badger In Disguise chapter 5 . 6/6/2009 I don't think that was the best time for him to come back in. It was too fast, too sudden, and it broke the flow of the rest of the story. If you want her to get with Snowman, and Nixon to come back, I would have her get into a relationship with Xavier and then Nixon comes back. It's still interesting the way you have it, and I'll be waiting to see if it will push her a Xavier together. |
| JZK chapter 4 . 6/5/2009 I think I like dialogue more than thoughts because it gets the story moving |
| Ameliaaa.xx chapter 2 . 6/5/2009 Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg! I LOVE IT ! i think this is really brilliant. i mean its only the 1st chapter and all but omg it is really amazing. i write stories myself but this is really great. Omg. Big fan :) |
| TERMINATED chapter 4 . 6/4/2009 OMG OMG OMG LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT UPDATE SOON! IT'S LIKE...THE EXACT KINDA THING I READ! DD ADDICTION MUCH! |
| Badger In Disguise chapter 4 . 6/4/2009 Nice job, keep it up, I will be anxiously awaiting the next update. I think you might like Love's Time Limit. Just a thought. It seems similar, yet dissimilar. So, all in all, wonderful, Very dynamic characters and tangled situations. Can't wait to hear more about Nixon. Always loved enemyXEnemy stories. |
| AlijaS117 chapter 4 . 6/4/2009 Xavier is awesome! |
| AlijaS117 chapter 3 . 6/3/2009 Your story is really interesting update soon!:D |
| JZK chapter 2 . 5/26/2009 where does her ada even get the money to buy the drinks in the first place? I like Xavier - he is quite funny |
| Miss Mysteries chapter 1 . 5/25/2009 Intriguing prologue. Interesting charcters. Hope you update soon. |
| XxCaptainKoalaxX chapter 1 . 5/25/2009 Awesome story...! LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON, PLEASE!...? ] |