Reviews for Incinerate
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
I love the candle imagery in this, in the first line, and then the use of the word "flickering" and "reflecting." It's beautiful. And I can completely picture this.
Isca chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
I like the fact that a candle flame is supposed to be the mediator between these two people - they're too shy or proud to express their feelings, and so, they sit in silence and hope that the shadows that are cast upon them speak the words that they dare not utter. :)
Keree chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
So deep. The reader can definetly see some conflicting iner emotions going on.
improv chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
I almost expect the poem to rhyme - but the sadness of the last few lines is really brought forward by the fact that it doesn't. Very good poem ]]
the-ever-changing-name chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
great job! I like this one. The title is intriguing
403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
This is really beautiful; it conjures up a vivid image.
Isabella22 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Fantastic!