Reviews for Sprinkler
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
I like this. It's much more straightforward than a lot of your pieces, but still it makes a great comparison and uses really nice personification.
ygg chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
Quite original imagery you use! I love the summer feeling it gives me :-) Good work!
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
You took the idea of a "sprinkler" and created a heartwarming, beautiful poem.

I applaud you.
Not-Without-Mustard chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Too adorable! Very heartwarming, in an innocent way. I love the imagery in the word "freckles" (as I see nearly every other reviewer!).
The-Golden-Hour chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
cute poem :L...i think its really nice :)
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
I love how playful and innocent this is. The use of the word freckles is amazing a kind of adorable.

Peace, Daze
Isca chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Your use of 'freckle' imagery is wonderful.
NewRevolution chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
ah, i loved it! Especially 'the warm face of summer'. Just lovely. Well done.
LittleLoser.AndRoloLamperouge chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
wow, you got to use sprinkler in a very distinct way...