ahahahaha this chapter made me LOL. It certainly shows the more...risque side of Aurelie. I love it!

aw I like James. I hope we'll see some James vs. Emory action in Opal Fox, eh?

Haha, we women can smile hate at each other, it's a good art. :P

Keep it up, I'm enjoying this!

Aurelie has a sword now... her enemies better watch out... :P

lol, this was such a funny chapter! "The bunny!" XD I also like how the dad and mom tease each other.

A little girl holding a sword? My, what an odd picture! :P

Hehe, this was pretty cute. I liked the interaction with the characters.

One thing: After someone says' "Well", add a comma after it.

Hahah this is really cute! I love the whole Dielle family, especially Annabelle and Aurelie :) Please update soon! And have you written the Opal Fox before? Because Dragon especially contains several spoilers, but I couldn't help but read it :). I love the women in your stories - they're strong, assertive, entertaining, and rather atypical (i.e. Marie prefers feminine things like playing music to learning to fight with a sword, but is still strong). I like the style of the writing, how these are snippets of the Dielle's past, how each piece is kinda disconnected, and how we don't know everything about the family, if you know what I mean.

Heehee aw the poor bunny. It's amazing to me that Dielle and Anabella have gotten along as well as they have, haha. Actually, they remind me a bit of my Mum and Dad...

Aurelie should drag her father onto the boat. I'd love to see that.

Another fun chapter. It's great to see what caused Aura to have so many problems (wink) - I mean, what caused her to grow up into such a fabulous and lovely young person in OF.

I am more and more tempted to sick the dogs on Charles. - "sic"

This piece amuses me. Aura's manipulation of her mother is really cute, and I love how her father is pretty much as bad as she is.

"She struck the wooden man in the crotch again and he was sure she was a natural." - Hahaha excellent criteria, Dielle has.

One point confuses me - I thought Aura practiced swordplay with Demsby? Was this in addition to her fencing practice with Kingsley, then?

Opps! It’s a secret! - "Oops"

cute story!