|Reviews for Yours
| ImmanenceEnsured chapter 14 . 7/21/2014
The fluff and sentimentality work well for this story. I think it would be too depressing otherwise. This is a nice, enjoyable read that pulls at the heartstrings. The whole situation (Travis being underage, all the tats) could be creepy, if it wasn't for your ability to turn Daniel into such a lovable, kind-hearted guy. This is fiction, so I'm convinced their fairytale romance will last forever. And I love Rafe. Thanks for the cute read!
| ImmanenceEnsured chapter 4 . 7/21/2014
Daniel and Travis are two sweet, beautiful characters that I already like a lot, and I wish them all the happiness in the world, but two minor details: One, no one should EVER decide your tattoo for you, definitely not if it's your first, even more so because it's so large. Two, the thing has to be anointed and covered up immediately, or poor Travis will be bleeding all over his clothes!
Very excited to see where they end up, though. You can't not care for these two.
| Krimsyn chapter 14 . 12/11/2013
*Squeal* The whole story is utterly adorable and I absolutely LOVE Travis' transformation and the last chapter when Daniel comes to rescue him!
| ren147 chapter 14 . 4/6/2013
OH MY GOODNESS. Is that really the end? I feel like there should be more. It was really sweet. I love it.
| Facella chapter 14 . 1/7/2013
This story was amazing! I read it all in one afternoon and now I just can't believe it's over. :(
Those parents of Travis are horrible. I mean, their son has a boyfriend for over a year, spends most of his time at his place, sings in a fucking band, gets a completely new look and they don't even realize it? What the fuck? And it takes his brother a whole concert to recognize him? What sort of brother is that? I'd always recognize my brother, even if I hadn't seen him in months and he'd gotten a new look and stuff. Argh! Makes me want to throttle them so badly!
Okay, now that I got rid of that rant, I must say I think I'd probably start drooling over Daniel. Tattoos and piercings are so hot! I've always thought that's hot, so I'm glad I finally found a story with tattooed an pierced protagonists. Awesome! Those wings got to be hot as hell on Travis. *stares at puddle of drool* Whoops... ;)
I love the ending. I'm so glad Travis got away from this horrible family of his. Rafe is an awesome guy.
Normally, I like my Hurt/Comfort a lot angstier and sader, but something about this story is so completely mesmerizing I fell in love after the first paragraph. It's so incredibly sweet without being cheesy. It's just magical! Another addition to my favourites list!
| Mt chapter 14 . 10/8/2012
Thank you for writing this, it was fun to read. Are you going to write a sequel? I want to know more about Daniel and Travis's new life!
| falling-into-fate chapter 14 . 8/9/2012
Hahaha! Best ending ever with the ass tattoo thing! xD
This story was really sweet, I'm so glad I read it. It definitely fulfilled my need for a story with music, piercings, and tats. ;)
| Fumiki chapter 14 . 11/27/2011
Wait, it's the end? No more? NOOOOOOOOO!
There should be more of this. This story is so sweet, and I really love Daniel and Travis. They're so cute.
The last chapter was definitely the best part of this story ]
You should write more story! Keep up the good work!
| frolic-horror chapter 14 . 3/8/2011
The story had a lot a promise and the sugary sweet romance was lovely, BUT...
I was annoyed by the whole "property of.." tattoed on Travis' ass.
I was also a bit appaled at Daniel deciding to take an impresionable 15 year old to get his body covered in piercings and tattoes (which they didn't even discuss in advance!). I'm sure that in real life Rafe would have refused to tattoo Travis regardless of how friendly he was with Daniel.
Travis' family is a bit over the top "evil". If there are a lot of children I can believe that a quiet middle child might be overlooked, but not to THAT extent. At least not when the other kids seemed to be well cared for.
| TwilightBloodBell chapter 14 . 3/2/2011
I loved this story! It was so sweet and nice, I'll miss Daniel and Travis!
| lostrealmsdreams chapter 14 . 8/8/2010
Lol, two words. Loved. It.
| Dark Lynnette chapter 14 . 7/27/2010
That was sad, but sweet and touching. I still liked the style from beginning to end and thought the characters were spot on.
| VerletztesHerz chapter 14 . 4/18/2010
XD The ass tattoo bit in the last chap was brilliant. Great story. It was a little cliched, but who doesn't LOVE some cheese every now and then? Bravo! Adding story to Favs
| Dark Lynnette chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
Poor guys. I like how this has started and am definitely curious. Each male has a distinct voice that suggest two different types of loneliness. I think the challenge will be in not overlapping the two and confusing the reader, but with your strong style and voice it seems unlikely that you'll fail in this. I hope that isn't too confusing, but I have often find (mostly online) that the writer doesn't quite know what they want to convey until about chapter 3 or later. You most definitely know your characters and I'm glad for that. It's refreshing to read something that wasn't just thrown together just hoping that someone would like it.
If you like what you're writing (you clearly do), then I don't see how more people won't like it and want to enjoy it with you.
PS. it's kinda late here, so maybe my brain isn't all together. In short, I like the story so far.
| Nofro chapter 4 . 3/28/2010
Apart from fact that I like your story I noticed some things I just couldn't keep my mouth shut. In first(or second)chapter is told that first time Travis saw Daniel was at August, but when they talk he said May. Second. At the beginning of chapter 4 Travis came home, but then suddenly you write that Daniel got up to his room. Just not the right word.
Otherwise it's all minor things in good story