No wonder the poor guy was so messed up. Im not going to lie that made me ball. I so hope they get a happily ever after

Oh, ouch. This is a really great story. In just about every chapter there is at least one heart wrenching moment, but it always sort of works out in one way or another. You did a really great job on it.

The scene was good I liked it.

Oh god how sad! No offence but that boys family is a bunch of pricks.

Poor poor Daniel. Poor Travis too. That is very sad. I hope things get better!

Oh no! how sad for both of them!

I'm speechless! This is probably one of the best slash stories I've EVER encountered; I read the whole thing in one go, that's how hooked I am to this. Your writing and style is flawless, your characters are realistic and the plots are gritty and raw and also really fucking sweet. Daniel is a phenomenal character! And Travis is his perfect fit. I'm definitely favouriting, subscribing and will be following this! xD

Real good chapter, I could feel the emotion.

*hugs Daniel* The poor guy. Finds out his boyfriend is cheating then gets jumped. :(

Very powerful story!

Hey. So, I was listening to my iPod the other day and a song came on and I was instantly reminded of this story. It's by Paramore. 'We Are Broken'. It's as if it was written for Travis and Daniel. The lyrics where it goes:

'Cause we are broken

What must we do to restore

Our innocence

And all the promise we adored

Give us life again cause we just wanna be whole'

/watch?veZle9Ek2u3s

is amazing. They're perfect for them, I think so, at least. And I definitely agree with you about piercings and tattoo's. I love guys with piercings. Very hot :P Nipples and lip does it most for me. And the bellybutton. And I've dated a couple guys with surface hip piercings. I think the only piercing I don't like are eyebrows. Anti-eyebrow, that is HOT. Haha. Anyways. About the story! It was awful listening to Daniel tell his story. You haven't heard about it in such detail before. For a moment I thought that Sean guy was the one that had jumped him or something. I jumped to conclusions, so sue me. When I like a story I guess along the whole way. Who cares if I'm rarely right? Anyways. I loved the new chapters. When I started reading the seventh I couldn't understand it but back-tracking I realised I hadn't read all of Chapter 6. I had to rush and forgot. So I have a reason for not reviewing. Anyways. I loved the chapter and a half :P So. Check put the song. I think it's pretty awesome. Um. I think that's it. Well. Ciao. I love that word. Haha.

D: POOR DANIEL! I want to hug him!

And I'm so glad you didn't draw it out. I don't like angst 'cause then I get all depressed, but once I start reading a story, I don't want to stop! Especially when it's as good as this one is. :)

Oh my god, boys with belly rings are SO hot. Thank you, someone, for finally noticing. BTW, is a lead bar just a phrase, or was it ACTUALLY a lead bar, because that sounded kinda dangerous.

The easyest way to understand the rating is a "M" rating on the site is the same as a "R" rating in in a movie. "MA" would be adult movies (porno).

Fictionpress rating compaired to movie Rating PG

T PG13

M R

MA X

Hope that helps you understand the rating better.

Pft, of course I came back! ;) This couple is freakin' adorable.

Oh noez! :O Poor Travis... Daniel's an idiot. Stupid men and their stupid secrets.

The sex scene was fine Bluelee, don't worry about it. I'm pretty sure your other reader enjoyed it as well. In the future feel free to continue writing them.