Aww! What? No! Leave it in! :]

I have to say, you rather give a fair warning with the 'XOX' or whatever thing. First time I've ever seen a warning to a sex scene like that. I mean, sure, when an author says at the beginning, Warning: Sexual Content.

So...I like the moving forward with the relationship. Found it to be a little too fluffy at times and a bit...dare I say it...cliche? Just with everything working out so smoothly and so soon. Eh. I've been wrong before. But, it is a good chapter, and I liked it.

Aw, they're so sweet. Fluff really is fun to write, huh?

Um, just something I noticed. Maybe six or seven paragraphs from the end, you wrote "Trevor" instead of "Travis". I do the same thing sometimes.

Sweet chapter. I love angel wing tattoos.

Aw, they make such an adorable couple! They're just too cute. w

realisetic or not, I love it. I ratter read things that are not 100% realisetic because I can find myself stuck in the story. If I wanted a 100% realisetic story I'll go sit in my front window of my house and watch life go by.

And I will always be here. _ My reviews may be late at times, but I'm still here reading.

Great chapter. And Travis went into Daneil's yard? wonder whatz going to happens. Can't wait to read and see. _

I thought it was a little unbelievable. I can't imagine anyone crying for someone who they don't know. I think you have an interesting idea, though.

poor Daniel :(

wow. A lot of writing. I like the way this is put so far. enough detail to simply satisfy the curiousity but little enough to leave me wanting to know more. Good job.

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