|Reviews for Tick Tock|
| bl34ch521 chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
very nice! bailey is such an interesting character. i'd love to read more of the banter between him and gwen. x3
| tHeKir chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
LOL that was brilliant! have you thought of how funny this would be as a movie? i'd totally watch it! A longer version of this would be epic, but this oneshot is good. are you going to do a sequel?
| Patches P.I chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
I really like this story! Bailey is defiantly one of my favorite characters. Favorite!
| Got.Ink chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
I absolutely loved this story. It was very well written, the first-person narration was brilliant, and your characterization was vibrant. The only thing I would suggest is be wary of the rather long-and-hyphenated-phrase-adjectives you use rather frequently. Although often hilarious and well placed, the one describing the blonde floozy was a bit too much.
Bailey is amazing. He is simply enthralling...one of my favorite lines:
“That was less satisfying than I expected.”
He made me laugh out loud, and yet I could complete comprehend and understand Gwen's anger, especially at the aftermath of the "epic battle between good and evil."
| RightToRemainSilent chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Devil Dog! Where on earth did you get that idea? It's so original and... slightly weird, but I love it. Bailey is now on my list of favourite characters, please update soon (if you're going to)!
Great writing, great idea, great style.