|Reviews for So Much For That|
| Sakina the Fallen Angel chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Ouch...this was both disturbing, yet made for compelling reading. Maybe you should up the rating to be M!
~ Sakina x
| meowmie chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
| Krazy Karma chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Well, that was disturbing.
I've got to say, it was a very well-written story, even if it's a little creepy.
A few nitpicks: It seemed like the girl was sticking the knife into her mouth at first (that's something I never thought I'd say) when you write "I corrected my grip on the handle and brought the tip to my lips. I took a steadying breath before I plunged it into me." Later, at "womanly parts" it becomes obvious that's not the case. You could clarify that earlier on.
Also, the last sentence is a bit much. It seems like you're overdoing it and making sure we understand the message you're trying to send. The line before that drives the point home perfectly well, in a very effective and less desperate way.
Overall it was goose-bump inducing. :)