|Reviews for My LOve|
| Silent Learner chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
This one is great. The only line I didn't like was "I’m pretty much a goner"
If it were just "I'm a goner" it might create a stronger feeling of emptiness that occurs when your love is gone.
Very good poem!
| ThisisWhereIComeIn chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Nice job. :)