Reviews for My LOve
Silent Learner chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
This one is great. The only line I didn't like was "I’m pretty much a goner"

If it were just "I'm a goner" it might create a stronger feeling of emptiness that occurs when your love is gone.

Very good poem!
ThisisWhereIComeIn chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Aw, sweet.

Nice job. :)