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Do You Regret
Unknown Error 4.0
chapter 1 .
5/30/2009
Sad poem. The ending five lines were very powerful.
"Do you regret?/Ever loving such a fool/If you regret/Then I regret/Us."
The "Do you regret?" repetition was haunting. Nice.
~Con