|Reviews for regretted, but needed|
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
I liked the 'church service' and 'lovers' lines the best-the metaphors were creative and honest. :)
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
in the place of nitpicking, in the fourth couplet,
i believe you meant "uninvited" and are therefore missing an "n"
this is simple, yet very effective.