Reviews for Nintendo DS
fear-junkie chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Brilliant writing, although you didn't make the motive clear. I mean did he (the killer) kill him (the victim) out of a fit of sadistic rage or was he just a sadist?
meduse chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
...oh jeez. please tell me this ISN'T based on a real life experience xD

i don't really know what to make of it...the writing is fantastic, but it almost left me speechless. (that is a good thing, yes)

keep writing!

~FO
Increasing Devotion chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Okay well...interesting... Well, I have to say you don't suck at writing. Actually I would say it isn't bad at all. But this story could use a better summary. I'm assuming this was spur of the moment writting, but there actually could be more to this. Although this much violence isn't really my "cup of tea" you should continue with it and add to it.