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   Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/27/2009 Well, this is just phenomenal. Short but it expresses so much. "rushing sun, the climbing sky" & "gather on my smile" -Wonderful imagery. Adding to my favorites :) |
| REDheshy chapter 1 . 5/27/2009 After re-reading this I quite like it...the last three bracketed () lines really bring it together. "...stop to gather on my smile" is my favorite line. |