Reviews for rest, slide, stop
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Well, this is just phenomenal. Short but it expresses so much.

"rushing sun, the

climbing sky"


"gather on my smile"

-Wonderful imagery.

Adding to my favorites :)
REDheshy chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
After re-reading this I quite like it...the last three bracketed () lines really bring it together.

"...stop to gather on my smile" is my favorite line.