|Reviews for rest, slide, stop|
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Well, this is just phenomenal. Short but it expresses so much.
"rushing sun, the
"gather on my smile"
Adding to my favorites :)
| REDheshy chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
After re-reading this I quite like it...the last three bracketed () lines really bring it together.
"...stop to gather on my smile" is my favorite line.