Reviews for Falling? |
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listen to what i've never said chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 I really like this one :) Don't really ask me why, because there are a million little things that make this amazing for me. Basically I'll say that I like it because, it just IS that awesome. Great job! |
Breathtaking chapter 1 . 6/11/2009 This is great. I really enjoyed it. |
Child of the Creatures chapter 1 . 5/27/2009 Ah, I like this! The way you wrote it is so cool! Keep up the great work Angel! |
Katy Jones chapter 1 . 5/27/2009 this be good. |
ArekuKawaii chapter 1 . 5/27/2009 Well it was interesting for sure, but I think you tried too hard. You bolded or underlined something in every line. You should bold things that are important once in a while. So, I am not much of a fan of the style of the poem. I do like the falling because the way you typed that out actually gives the allusion of falling. |