Reviews for Only His Friend
Xxluvbugger213xX chapter 14 . 10/19/2011
Hm. Why do you only have 25 reviews? My stories have more, but they're not nearly as good as I thought this one was.

One thing that would help you out a lot would be to add some detail because I couldn't picture very well what the guys looked like until (for some of them) the very end.

Otherwise, I love the plot!

I completely didn't expect Charlie to be leaning on the twins for actual support, so that twist was nice.

I'm going to read another one of your stories now... ( :

Question though, did I do, but I don't have more reviews? I swear it had more...
Kinjirareta Ai chapter 14 . 11/2/2010
I'm not sure I reviewed this like i meant to, so i'll review it now. ANd if i have before, well then you get one more review.

Fantastic! I really enjoy the emotion and the trials these two go through before being together. It's a great story with well written characters and a wonderflul storyline.

I loved reading it and hated it when the story ended. Thanks so much for sharing!
SometimesG chapter 13 . 9/24/2010
i like your story though i couldn't stand the wait and complications of their relationship. glad it turned out right for both of them.
Da-zGreen chapter 14 . 7/31/2010
Aw.. What a cute story this is. I loved it! Hope to read more from you! Thanks for the fun!
mate.feed.kill.repeat chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
So far, I've enjoyed this story. It would be awesome if you updated. (:

If I were to be extremely picky, I would say that you have some grammer issues happening. The one that stands out most is that you haven't spelt out numbers. In general, you should just spell out a number (like instead of saying 4, say "four"), unless it's a date or something.

Like I said, I've liked this story so far, and you should update. I like where it's going. It has great potential, and I like the plot. You're making this married best friends thing work really well.

rids chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
heyy great story... but is chapter 4 supposed to be the end... because the dropdown bar goes upto chapter 14, but when i try to go further than chapter 4, it says something about an 'outdated url'... it's a shame really because i wanted to read more... if you can help that'd be great :)
violet-eyez chapter 14 . 7/18/2010
aww so sweet
zoba20 chapter 14 . 7/18/2010
omg such a sweet ending

loved it so much !
I Will Not Die I Will Survive chapter 14 . 7/18/2010
aw so sweet :D this story was awesome, i loved it so much XD
cosmopolitan chapter 14 . 7/17/2010
finally got it to work... took an awful lot of refreshing, but yay!

wonderful job, dear. very sweet ending and super enjoyable. thank fro this treat!

best of luck with future stories, i'm super excited to read them!
cosmopolitan chapter 11 . 7/17/2010
for some reason, even though it says tha there's a chapter 12, every time i try to pen it i recieve the message:

Chapter text not found. Please check to see you are not using an outdated url.

New chapter/story can take up to 15 minutes to show up.

*sigh* and i was so incredibly excited, too!
zoba20 chapter 11 . 7/17/2010
omg omg i wanna die of happiness...i so can't wait to read more

i hope u keep sending me updates cuz i'm going on a two week vacation starting next week
I Will Not Die I Will Survive chapter 11 . 7/17/2010
didnt realise how much i loved this stroy until you updated a shit load of chapters, been a while since you updated :/, im glad you did they were all awesome i cant wait for the enxt one XD
cosmopolitan chapter 10 . 7/17/2010
interesting twists here, i honestly wasnt expecting it. i'm intrigued, and cant wait to see how this will turn out from here on out.
zoba20 chapter 10 . 7/17/2010
omg i am so inlove with this story

please update more soon
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