|Reviews for the music of my fat gut|
| Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
this story is a gas.
you're a kook! love it.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Interesting. Not really sure how to read it, but then, I'm probably missing something obvious. I have a tendency to do that. I love the lines, "and here, it rises; and here, it falls." It's just very musical and poetic. Beautiful. Keep writing! :)
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
This poem is very innovative. Your allusions to historical places only adds to the grand nature of the 'sweeping music.' :)
| dreamoflove chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
this is interesting...