Reviews for Homeward Bound
emmasaurus chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Awww man! This was one of my favorite reads when I was an anonymous reviewer. So sad to see you've taken it down. ): I hope you'll be able to put it up somewhere else or self-publish it!
killerqueen123 chapter 2 . 4/14/2012
This doesn't make sense... It wasn't until the next day when I'd had a little hair of the dog and what seemed like half a bottle of aspirin ... I don't mean any offense but that part of the sentence doesn't make sense...
ellie.o chapter 18 . 1/22/2012
Ahahaha...I knew the security camera would be put to use at some stage, but wasn't sure how :) Anticipating the happy ending!
ellie.o chapter 9 . 1/22/2012
:) I like references to movies that I have seen...are they really that old? Eep!

Btw. I really like that the story is set in a bookshop and that you are spending time in the story to develop the family relationships of the protagonist.
fortondoando chapter 8 . 1/22/2012
I'm reading this! :)

I like the pace and voice of the story. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Ederra chapter 21 . 12/21/2011
I absolutely loved it!

Pretty much read it in one sitting...

I loved all of the characters, their (background) stories and those references that you've put in.

It was great that there were lots of things happening, i.e. the renovation, fundraiser, Sean, getting over Adam...etc. It made Homeward Bound interesting and intriguing - wanting me to read more.

So yeah, it was great!

jojo.102 chapter 21 . 8/25/2011
i loved this story! You are an amazing writer and all your stories are funny and great.

PS. hehehehe Chuckles :P
caitly chapter 21 . 8/4/2011
I really like this story. I like how you made the characters real. I also liked how at the end they didn't magically decide to have a huge traditional wedding and have eight trillion kids or something when it's totally out of character for them.
D-Mish chapter 21 . 4/26/2011
This story made me really happy, even if just for a night. Its just a really nice somewhat realistic (I wish) love story. Well written :)
2nd chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
Um, you DO know that your story WON for 'Best Supporting Character' for SKoW, right? So you can change it to 'winner' instead of 'nominee', right? Just saying...

Anyway, well-written chapter. I could paint the scene in my head from your description.
CATpuccino chapter 21 . 2/20/2011
I've just finished reading your story and it is so amazing!
Wanchoo chapter 6 . 2/11/2011
Haha, this chapter made my day :)
Kelly Rogala chapter 21 . 2/7/2011
Ohh once again another great story from you! Now go and finish your other story so I can read it! Then you'll have to write another one because I've read all your others! Keep up the great work!
moldyredskittle chapter 3 . 1/30/2011
i like it but for some weird reason it wasn't until half way through the third chapter that i knew Sydney was a girl haha wel anyways good work!
MiidKniight chapter 21 . 1/30/2011
This was wonderful. I didn't review well or many chapters. I like reading the story all in one go. It makes everything seem more like a novel I'm holding in my hand.

I think you did marvelous. Your characters were well written and none of the situations were silly and shouldn't be in the story.

Some parts got to cheesy for me but you addressed most those situations with a comment that made the characters even better. Ex: "I will end you" Definitely made me laugh. There was another moment when Sydney was confessing her love that I kind of winced but it work mostly cause she was ignored. I think it's because I've been watching Jane Austeny romances and those are all so subtle.

There was only one thing I would change. She thought repeatedly "acting like a teenager." I would change some of those just because I think when someone is in love no matter the age they'll probably do the very same things. (The scene of her quitting, coming back and them kissing passionately. Everything magically fixed.)

One question. Did she ever tell him about the videotape? I think that would make an interesting one shot. Say he found it years down the road. Anyways, thanks for a wonderful story.
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