Reviews for Homeward Bound
NateBran chapter 10 . 6/5/2009
I've just read all 10 chapters, and I must say you are an excellent writer. I love Sean and Sydney! Keep up the good work, update soon!
Vaudeville chapter 10 . 6/4/2009
I was so happy to see that you updated. It was quick! And I'm sure not complaining about the length. Jeez, Sean and Sydney are darn cute! I love how you're developing their relationship. Gah, I just love everything about this story. Chuck is adorable. Once again, you really are a fabulous writer. Thanks for the update.
belle1220 chapter 10 . 6/4/2009
I liked this chapter - you can go on and keep writing long chapters ;)

Chuck is too fun and I love the subtle way you're building to Sean and Sydney.
andee lee chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
Take it off, woman. Sounds like Adam was a real jerk the whole time and she just never realized. Sigh. Love can blind you, can't it?

I feel bad for her but I know you have an awesome story planned for her so she'll be okay.

Oh, and I figured out what it is about your writing style that I like so much. It's the balance that you have...not too much background info but enough for us to grasp the story, good dialogue, and really unique characters that hold their own. It's good stuff and i LIKE IT. :-)
andee lee chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
I decided to check this story out since I like Route 66 so much and you mentioned the When Harry Met Sally reference (totally my favorite movie!) and so far I'm not disappointed! I absolutely love the last part of this chapter - "I had accepted his apology quite willingly and it was only many, many years later when he left me three months before our wedding when I realized that he really should have stayed to help me pick up the mess he’d created." I think this line is absolutely brilliant! It's such a great way to set up the story.

This is a great start, for sure. I love that her parents own a book store...lucky duck! How awesome would it be to have all those books at your fingers for free!

Anyways, I'm very curious as to why Adam left Sydney and what exactly is going to happen...

Oh, and strangely enough the latest story I'm working on is about a girl coming back to her hometown after being away for a while... we must really be brain twins or something! We're on the same wavelength. :-)

belle1220 chapter 9 . 6/2/2009
I'm really enjoying your story. I hope you update soon, because I am really looking forward to the progression of Sydney's and Sean's relationship.

Great job.
Vaudeville chapter 9 . 6/1/2009
I love movie references. So, to me at least, it is not lame. Again, as I did with the rest, I thought this chapter was great! You really are a fantastic writer. I'm excited to see the development between Sydney and Sean and I like the relationship that's developing with Amy and Sydney, it's cute. You best get writing because I don't know how long I can wait for the next update without getting anxious. Haha. Anyway, once again, awesome job!
Vaudeville chapter 8 . 5/31/2009
I really, really like this story. I think you're an excellent writer. It's funny and realistic and I like how Sydney's reaction to the break-up is not too melodramatic. She's sad but she's getting on with life and realizing that Adam probably wasn't the best for her. I'm excited to see where the rest of this goes. I hope you don't get discouraged from the lack of reviews. I find that people on this site are a little review shy. Your story is great and I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work.

PS. I love Chuck. The End.
Annaface chapter 4 . 5/28/2009
I really like this so far. Though I don't think today's teenagers are that bad ;)

I'm looking forward to reading more!
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