|Reviews for Are You There, God?|
| The Chaos Sorcerer chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
This was good. If i may apply some constructive critisism: if you extended the paragraphs describing the persons life, using a bit more emphasis and less common-place words like Shit, then the writing would give off a more serious and emotional meaning. After all, the person is about to commit suicide.
Other than that, a great piece.
| Connie Loudermilk chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
dark, I've been i the dark a time or two myself.
| with eyes looking up chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
i like it.
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
That's one of the hardest things about believing in a god and having faith-the fact that such a being would let 'bad things happen to good people.' The 'click' at the end was very hard-hitting. Good work. :)