|Reviews for Lost & Found|
| Eli the Strange chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
She is everything and more- the solemn hypnotic... I have had this experience, and it is not pleasant. Perfect capture of it. Go you: props, kudos, et cetera.
| pixy dust and fairytales chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
powerful piece. i hope you're doing all right (: great job!
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
The repetition of some of the lines really made it clear that the speaker is trying to convince themselves that this person, this love they feel, isn't just a figment of their imagination. :)
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
I love the abstract melodrama of this - it's very powerful, don't get me wrong, but the emotion is succulent.
I have to say that I don't particularly like that you made parts of it bold - it's an artistic choice, I know - it just didin't do it for me. I feel like your meaning would still get across to the reader without that. Either way, I really enjoyed this piece, keep up the good work.