Reviews for Break Away
Noir Schist chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
The poem holds an intense sense of reality even when it's spoken mostly in a metaphorical sense, and it's easy to understand the intended meaning. Great job! I loved it.
Secrets.Announced chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
very good. I like it ]
Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
I love your poetry, it's so beautiful. Always draws me in!

It's a little choppy, just the shortness of the lines, but that could be fixed if you combine a few of them here and there. :)

I love the imagery.

~Mara