Reviews for Break Away |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The poem holds an intense sense of reality even when it's spoken mostly in a metaphorical sense, and it's easy to understand the intended meaning. Great job! I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good. I like it ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your poetry, it's so beautiful. Always draws me in! It's a little choppy, just the shortness of the lines, but that could be fixed if you combine a few of them here and there. :) I love the imagery. ~Mara |