Reviews for The Gold and The Green
dreameratbang chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
Wow, that was absolutely beautiful. I loved how you used gold to signify death and not the normal autumn brown, especially in the first few lines. It flows well too. I like the tone of the poem too, the calm accpetance of death and the deep sorrow from within that cannot be flushed out. Great work!

Keep writing!

-Anusha
Thornprick chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
gorgeous! i love it so much!

- Thornprick (join,website: faeryofthevioletrose.)