Reviews for Fire
Lithium of Mercy chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Really interesting! I like your writing style. It makes everything flow very well. I could visualize it all in my head, as if I were watching a movie. Good work!
BaxterB chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Very interesting, love the concept. I can see where you're going with the style of the story, but it just comes off as awkward, with a few sentences just not working. Despite this, the descriptions are still nice and you definitely have good atmosphere. Finally, I love the ending. It's written brilliantly (I assume you mean "chocking" instead of "cocking").
Per Noctem chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Interesting. Very nice, if a bit vague. Good details of the actions. Short, sweet, and well-written.