|Reviews for Variables|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Interesting haiku. There's certainly a lot in this, so many different ways it can be read, and while I'm seeing images, I'm not even sure what I should be seeing, and I kinda like that. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Perhaps you speak of the mind. Surely our thoughts and dreams are gleaming tendrils. :)
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
The idea of a self-made cavern makes me invision an internal cave. As if, the person mentioning it were becoming introverted, and withdrawing further and further into themselves. Keep up the good work.