I like how youve used the punction and i really like how you made only two words in the whole poem itallic, its not too overpowering, unlike me i tend to get carried away and end up editing all of it / .

it's crazy the way u described the same situation that im goin thru:/

i love him, he's my best friend, he says he loves me too, but at the same time he loves this other girl which is his gf..

but the funny thing is that i no wr meant to be also becuz y else would i be happy if he's happy wit her, and really just hurtin in the inside!

idk, but i really loved the poem, brought me to tears