|Reviews for Beginning of The End|
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 3 . 6/8/2012
your story is amazing! Why haven't you updated in so long?
Keep up the great work! :)
| Darkfairy102 chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Wow. That was interesting.
| Gabrielle Daven chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Very interesting, I actually quite enjoyed this! It actually seems as though your writing improves as the story continues. What I mean is, your tone (Emily's reactions to events, in particular) doesn't seem the most believable at the beginning, but really improves towards the end. And I absolutely love Gerard.
Be careful about the characteristics/qualities you attribute to vampires. It feels like you borrowed a lot of characteristics (speed, 'beauty', coldness, traits about newborns, etc) from Twilight, and that doesn't speak the best for originality.
I'm eager to read the next chapter, hope you plan on writing more.